I will analyze your story for plot character and pacing

Certaines informations sont présentées en anglais.

États-Unis

Je parle Anglais

I will evaluate your manuscript for plot character pacing and structure

Hello. I’m Allison. I spent three years in an intensive writers’ cohort, analyzing 12,000 words each week and participating in three-hour manuscript reviews. This training taught me to identify plot h...
À propos de ce service

Every good story benefits from an honest, thoughtful second set of eyes.

I provide developmental manuscript critiques for writers who want to strengthen their stories before publication. Ill look at the elements that make a book work as a wholeincluding plot, character development, pacing, structure, narrative tension, and story flow.

My approach is constructive and collaborative. Ill identify whats working, point out areas that may be confusing or underdeveloped, and offer practical suggestions for strengthening the manuscript while respecting your unique voice and vision.

My experience comes from three years in an intensive writers cohort, where I analyzed 12,000 words each week and participated in three-hour deep-dive manuscript reviews. My developmental guidance has also contributed to seven self-published books.

Whether youre working on a first draft, revising a completed manuscript, or preparing your book for publication, Ill give you clear, thoughtful feedback to help you move your story forward.

Langue:

Anglais

Genre:

Action

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Aventure

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Science fiction

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Fantaisie

Public :

Lecteurs généralistes

Point de vue:

Première personne

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Deuxième personne

Niveau de complexité:

Intermédiaire

Voix:

Actif

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