I will beta read your novel

Hello, thanks for considering my beta service!

Things I provide feedback on as a beta/editor

Font 

Correct formatting

Double-spacing the manuscript 

Headliners and page numbers 

Words displayed at the beginning of the manuscript 

Opening

1st sentence impressions

1st pages impressions 

World development 

Characters & character development

Show VS Telling

Believable reactions emotions 

Plot development

Pace 

Ending 

Last sentence vs. the first

Character's opening sentence vs. the last

Relationships

Is there enough conflict 

Things I liked 

Things that jolted me from the story 

Too much or too little description

Words properly used 

Grammar

Sentence structure & much more

(Some services are extra)

My goal is to help you gear up for success and see your novel on the shelves.  

I use Google Docs and Word. Also, if you wish to have in-line thoughts and reactions, make sure that I have permission to do so.

Genres I specialize in are Sci-Fi, Fantasy, Romance, Historical Romance, and Shifter books. I give a thorough and honest critique. I look forward to reading your novel. 

***I do not accept manuscripts about angels, demons, or things about god unless mythology-based ***