Danny Decillis

Danny provided a thoughtful and detailed developmental critique of the first 28,000 words of my YA fantasy novel. The feedback was honest, constructive, and clearly demonstrated that he had read the manuscript carefully. He highlighted both strengths and weaknesses, answered all of my specific questions,... Tout afficher

Danny did a great job with my manuscript. His feedback was thoughtful, encouraging, and he had clearly read the story thoroughly. He understood the kind of book I was aiming for (more of a slow-burn, introspective fantasy) and worked accordingly. He also picked up on the main character’s inner tension... Tout afficher

Danny provided an incredibly thoughtful and detailed beta read. His report went beyond surface-level reactions and really analyzed the structure, themes, pacing, and overall direction of the story. He highlighted strengths while also pointing out areas worth considering, always explaining the reasoning... Tout afficher

Danny was a fantastic beta reader for my Urban Fantasy novel, he was observant with my world building, and helped me find some errors I let slip through, I really appreciate all his feed back and was very happy to see he enjoyed my novel. Danny's report really helped on my final steps to publishing.

I gave Danny almost zero instructions because I wanted a completely cold beta read, and what he delivered in "Bag Boy 1988 response.pdf" was exceptional. Since he has a PhD, his report reads like a rigorous, high-level scholarly critique instead of just casual reader notes. If you want a real expert... Tout afficher