Ecriture B

thank you for doing this line at it to let me know what you think of the story so far and helping do the edits that are needed to help this story come to its full potential. thank you

once again, amazing work. gave thoughtful and in depth feedback with wonderful suggestions that really made me think on ways to include their suggestions in my next draft. absolutely wonderful feeback. I particularly appreciate where they pointed out my tendencies on repetition or over explaining absolutely wonderful beta reader

wonderful feedback as always. points out the things that need work and the things that are working well which is so helpful as my story gets more detailed

thank you for going over this with aligned it to let me know what's going on and what's really working real well and thank you for cleaning up the text where it's needed. thank you

Thanks for looking over this chapter and letting me know what has been working, and doing the line repair helps. Thank you.