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voicedbyshannon
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thank you for pointing out that I have fragmented sentences with the entire section pertaining to Gandius, but thank you for giving me a positive insight that I've actually got in this chapter down right and meet the flow feel coherent for the rest of the book. thank you
voicedbyshannon
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thanks for going over this chapter and let me know that what I got down works. I feel better that this chapter gives some good inside of the world that's emerged I'm also working through other chapters to flash out this environment to make sure it feels alive and understood.
voicedbyshannon
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Thank you for going over and looking over this chapter so far and giving an insight that I have done a excellent job in doing the modifications and adjustments needed to make the story feel and flow better. Thank You
voicedbyshannon
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thank you for reading over this chapter and let me know what I need to improve. I'll add a little more detail to make the relationships feel a little more fleshed out and more emotionally intimate with Kore's current life.
voicedbyshannon
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thank you for doing these chapter reviews for me they're helping me out do the polishing up what I need to get this story up to publication standards. thank you