Je lirai la version bêta et fournirai des commentaires honnêtes et exploitables

Lameez did a wonderful job on Beneath a Broken Dawn. Her in-line reactions were a joy to read. I could see exactly where the story landed for her (Yogel, Chigiri's roar, the "remains" scare in chapter 18), and that is just as valuable to a writer as the critiques. Her report was thoughtful, specific... Tout afficher

Fifty-one inline comments and every one of them anchored to a specific line. She marked where she stopped, where she went back and reread, and why — which is exactly what I asked for and what almost nobody actually delivers. She found four things four previous reviews had missed, including a flat contradiction... Tout afficher

Another gold standard beta reader, Lameez never shies away from telling where the manuscript looses immersion. She is excellent at narrative structure review and following the development of characterization. She provides her report in a timely manner and her suggestions make the revision process that much easier.

Lameez gave my novel a careful, honest read, with more than a hundred inline reactions that showed me exactly where she was hooked, moved, or lost. The places where she got confused turned out to be real problems, and fixing them made the book clearer. When I asked follow-up questions, her straight answers... Tout afficher

Lameez delivered a thoughtful, honest and well-organized beta read of my novel. She clearly read the manuscript carefully, pointed to specific pages, and gave me balanced feedback on pacing, characters and continuity, along with what worked well. Her notes on rushed chapters and on how the story reads... Tout afficher