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I will critique your first chapter
Indie author helping other indies publish their stories
All my life I've been an avid reader. Through the years, I've found a love of fantasy, romance, and sci-fi.
I've been working with indie authors for 8+ years, critiquing around 500 manuscripts. I'm a...
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À propos de ce service
Please message me before booking to confirm availability!
Your first chapter is your reader's first impression. Let's make it count!
I'll read your first chapter as a genuine reader and give you honest, thoughtful feedback on:
- Whether the opening hooks me
- Character introductions and engagement
- Pacing and clarity
- Plot setup and questions raised
- Confusing or distracting elements
- What makes me want to keep reading
- What's working well and what could be stronger
You'll receive a thorough follow-up report along with in-line comments showing my real-time reader reactions.
I've been an avid reader all my life and have spent 8+ years beta reading and critiquing fiction. I'm known for my "compliment sandwich" approach: I'll tell you what I love as well as what isn't working, because useful feedback should help you improve, not tear you down.
My goal is to give you an honest reader's perspective while treating your story with the care it deserves.
Fiction only. No samples currently offered.
Genre:
Livres pour enfants
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Romance
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Science fiction
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Fantaisie
Langue:
Anglais
Préférence du type de livraison
Veuillez informer le freelance de toute préférence ou préoccupation concernant l'utilisation d'outils d'IA dans la réalisation et/ou la livraison de votre commande.
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FAQ
What does a beta read cover?
This will mostly depend on what your story needs as I read, but in general, a beta read with me consists of focusing on: Pacing, plot, character development, worldbuilding, typos, grammar, and prose. In the requirements, I always ask what you'd like me to focus on.
What if I have follow up questions?
I always welcome follow-up questions! However, if you have them, I'd appreciate it if you'd ask them within the gig chat since I do not typically offer revisions.
What file types do you accept?
I currently accept manuscripts as doc, docx, pdf, and google doc files. If you wish to send me a google doc, please talk to me about this before booking so I can walk you through the process of sharing it.
Do you use AI for your beta reads?
No. I do beta reading because I love storytelling. So, I do absolutely everything from scratch. I don't use AI to beta read or to write the reader report.
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R rafaelito_sy
États-Unis
Tessy provided detailed and honest line edits and an in-depth report covering pacing, characterization, and other literary elements I requested extra focus on.
50 $US
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Utile?D daxhughes
États-Unis
Thank you for the feedback. Great advice and also encouraging! Helped me a lot to know where to go with the plot you were great to work with and your feedback was excellent.
50 $US
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3 semaines
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huntrss
États-Unis
Tessy is wonderful to work with and I deeply appreciate the feedback she provided on my chapters. It's so helpful to get a second pair of eyes on your work! I look foreword to working with her again!
50 $US
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13 jours
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Utile?H huntrss
États-Unis
I've really loved working with Tessy. She's thorough and professional, all the while being that little bit of encouragement that you need! Once again, I would definitely recommend this seller. :)
50 $US
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12 jours
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douglascapper
États-Unis
Fantastic beta read and feedback. This was a huge help to my project!
50 $US
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11 jours
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R rafaelito_sy
États-Unis
Tessy provided detailed and honest line edits and an in-depth report covering pacing, characterization, and other literary elements I requested extra focus on.
50 $US
Prix
12 jours
Durée
L Réponse du freelance
Utile?D daxhughes
États-Unis
Thank you for the feedback. Great advice and also encouraging! Helped me a lot to know where to go with the plot you were great to work with and your feedback was excellent.
50 $US
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3 semaines
Durée
L Réponse du freelance
Utile?H huntrss
États-Unis
Tessy is wonderful to work with and I deeply appreciate the feedback she provided on my chapters. It's so helpful to get a second pair of eyes on your work! I look foreword to working with her again!
50 $US
Prix
13 jours
Durée
L Réponse du freelance
Utile?H huntrss
États-Unis
I've really loved working with Tessy. She's thorough and professional, all the while being that little bit of encouragement that you need! Once again, I would definitely recommend this seller. :)
50 $US
Prix
12 jours
Durée
L Réponse du freelance
Utile?D douglascapper
États-Unis
Fantastic beta read and feedback. This was a huge help to my project!
50 $US
Prix
11 jours
Durée
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