Mary Show

I was looking for someone to alpha-read the first part of a new story, and I’m so happy I found Mary Show. She read my opening chapters and gave me excellent ideas for how to improve. It was also very helpful to know what was working well. Now I can use these notes to revise and improve. Many thanks... Tout afficher

Mary had thoughts about trimming some longer internal musings/reflections to not interrupt the actions. It's something that I need to do on all my chapters it was just repeated, in nearly the exact same phrasing, for each chapter reflection. I would have like slightly more targeted feedback with specific... Tout afficher

I am very glad that I contacted Mary for the review of the first to chapters of the book I am writing. Her feedback was excellent, she helped me understand what is working well and what needed to be changed/improved. I will continue working with her for the rest of the book. Thank you.

Exceptional Beta Reader — Highly Recommend I was genuinely amazed by the amount of care and attention she put into beta reading my manuscript. She didn’t simply tell me whether she liked the story—she gave me thoughtful, detailed feedback on every chapter and the epilogue, covering pacing, character... Tout afficher

The editing was done five days early definitely above expectations. The editing was done professionally and attention to detail was 100% there. I highly recommend this editor. 🪐 10/10 will be using this service again.