Je lirai en version bêta votre manuscrit fantasy avec des commentaires éditoriaux détaillés
Lecture bêta professionnelle et retours éditoriaux
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leh047

États-Unis
I was so nervous to hand over my first manuscript for review, but I am so glad I did because I loved working with Lauren! This was my first time having her...
echoesofelo

France
Working with Lauren on my first book was a real pleasure! She helped me go through a lot of grammar issues and unnecessary sentences. Overall, Lauren helped...
juliejeanette23

États-Unis
Lauren's edit and critique of my romantic fantasy novel was excellent! She provided many in-line comments, and she was open to sharing and brainstorming improvements...
mssoule

États-Unis
Lauren was amazing to work with. She is clearly passionate about helping authors and this showed in every interaction we had. She was responsive, clear, and...
mssoule

États-Unis
It’s always great to work with Lauren. This is my 2nd submission with her. She’s communicative, thorough and genuine. Thank you so much!
À propos de ce service
Je propose une lecture attentive en version bêta combinée à des retours éditoriaux détaillés pour fantasy, romantasy, dark romance, horreur, thrillers psychologiques et science-fiction.
Je lis à la fois du point de vue du lecteur et de l’éditeur, en prêtant une attention particulière à la sensation que procure l’histoire tout en identifiant ce qui pourrait être renforcé.
Selon votre formule, mes retours peuvent inclure :
- Des réactions et commentaires en ligne
- Une analyse de l’intrigue et du rythme
- Le développement des personnages et des relations
- Des retours sur le dialogue et la construction du monde
- Des suggestions pour la clarté, la formulation et le flux des phrases
- Des propositions de révision et de brainstorming
- Un rapport détaillé du lecteur couvrant les points forts, les préoccupations et les priorités de révision
Mon objectif n’est pas simplement de vous dire si j’ai aimé ou non votre manuscrit. J’expliquerai ce qui fonctionne, ce qui m’a sorti de l’histoire, où j’ai été confus, ce qui m’a enthousiasmé en tant que lecteur, et où l’histoire pourrait approfondir.
Lorsque cela est utile, je proposerai des suggestions concrètes et des solutions possibles tout en respectant votre voix et la direction que vous souhaitez donner à votre récit.
Je n’utilise pas l’IA pour lire, critiquer ou générer des retours sur les manuscrits de mes clients.
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Anglais
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Google Docs (accès en lecture ou commentaire)
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L leh047

États-Unis
I was so nervous to hand over my first manuscript for review, but I am so glad I did because I loved working with Lauren! This was my first time having her beta read my work, and the level of depth that she provided was invaluable. She provided in-line comments and a detailed report with feedback on...
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6 jours
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Utile?E echoesofelo

France
Working with Lauren on my first book was a real pleasure! She helped me go through a lot of grammar issues and unnecessary sentences. Overall, Lauren helped me on the proofreading and beta reading. It was hard to share my manuscript to a stranger but she was very understanding. The time like was also...
100 $US-200 $US
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11 jours
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juliejeanette23

États-Unis
Lauren's edit and critique of my romantic fantasy novel was excellent! She provided many in-line comments, and she was open to sharing and brainstorming improvements via chat. For example, she helped me with ways to make backstory and established worldbuilding clearer while avoiding info-dumps. The...
100 $US-200 $US
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12 jours
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Utile?M mssoule

États-Unis
Collaboration en coursLauren was amazing to work with. She is clearly passionate about helping authors and this showed in every interaction we had. She was responsive, clear, and was willing to answer my questions as we went along. Her comments were all hers and it is clear she does not use AI which is VERY appreciated. I...
100 $US-200 $US
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8 jours
Durée
M 
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Utile?M mssoule

États-Unis
Collaboration en coursIt’s always great to work with Lauren. This is my 2nd submission with her. She’s communicative, thorough and genuine. Thank you so much!
50 $US-100 $US
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6 jours
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L leh047

États-Unis
I was so nervous to hand over my first manuscript for review, but I am so glad I did because I loved working with Lauren! This was my first time having her beta read my work, and the level of depth that she provided was invaluable. She provided in-line comments and a detailed report with feedback on...
100 $US-200 $US
Prix
6 jours
Durée
M 
Réponse du freelance
Utile?E echoesofelo

France
Working with Lauren on my first book was a real pleasure! She helped me go through a lot of grammar issues and unnecessary sentences. Overall, Lauren helped me on the proofreading and beta reading. It was hard to share my manuscript to a stranger but she was very understanding. The time like was also...
100 $US-200 $US
Prix
11 jours
Durée
M 
Réponse du freelance
Utile?J 
juliejeanette23

États-Unis
Lauren's edit and critique of my romantic fantasy novel was excellent! She provided many in-line comments, and she was open to sharing and brainstorming improvements via chat. For example, she helped me with ways to make backstory and established worldbuilding clearer while avoiding info-dumps. The...
100 $US-200 $US
Prix
12 jours
Durée
M 
Réponse du freelance
Utile?M mssoule

États-Unis
Collaboration en coursLauren was amazing to work with. She is clearly passionate about helping authors and this showed in every interaction we had. She was responsive, clear, and was willing to answer my questions as we went along. Her comments were all hers and it is clear she does not use AI which is VERY appreciated. I...
100 $US-200 $US
Prix
8 jours
Durée
M 
Réponse du freelance
Utile?M mssoule

États-Unis
Collaboration en coursIt’s always great to work with Lauren. This is my 2nd submission with her. She’s communicative, thorough and genuine. Thank you so much!
50 $US-100 $US
Prix
6 jours
Durée
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