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Oyindamola may
@oyindamola_may
Beta Reader, Alpha Reader, Romance Fiction, Critique Plot, Character Feedback
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Anglais, Allemand, Hongrois, Portugais
À propos de moi
I help authors strengthen their stories through beta reading, alpha reading and manuscript critique. I provide honest, constructive feedback on plot, pacing, character development, emotional depth and reader engagement.
From romance and MM romance to cozy mysteries and first-chapter critiques, I focus on how a story reads, where it connects with readers, and where it may need clarity.
My goal is to give authors practical insights they can use to improve their manuscripts while preserving their unique voice and creative vision.
Compétences
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Bêta-lecture
I will beta reader romance beta reader fantasy beta reader sci fi, thriller beta reader
Bêta-lecture
I will be anlgbtq alpha beta reader first draft plot hole character feedback novel open
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Expérience professionnelle
Romance Fiction Beta Reader
Storyline Studios
Sep 2026 - Oct 2026 • 1 mo
Read romance fiction with attention to romantic chemistry, relationship development, emotional depth, character motivations, and story pacing. Provide reader-focused feedback on whether relationships feel believable, emotional moments connect, and the plot flows naturally. Help authors identify areas that may benefit from revision before publication.
Story Development Reader
BookNook 📚
Jul 2026 - Aug 2026 • 1 mo
Supported authors by reading their stories and examining how well the different elements worked together. Paid attention to character behaviour, story direction, plot twists, dialogue, pacing, and emotional impact. Considered whether character decisions made sense, whether important events felt believable, and whether the story maintained a consistent flow. Highlighted plot gaps, rushed moments, confusing sections, and opportunities to strengthen reader engagement. Provided practical reader-focused feedback to help authors see their work from another perspective.
Fiction Manuscript Reviewer
ReaderVerse
Jul 2026 - Aug 2026 • 1 mo
Review fiction manuscripts and early chapters from a reader's perspective. Focus on opening hooks, story clarity, character introductions, pacing, dialogue, and plot development. Provide clear observations about what works well and what may confuse readers, helping writers make informed decisions during revision.
