Seraphina

This is my first attempt at writing a book. I’ve had friends read it, but I wanted a person that doesn’t know me to provide real feedback. They followed the brief, and confirmed what I already was feeling the book needed. Now I can’t prove it, but I feel as though my book was put through AI, chapter... Tout afficher

I was hoping for someone to point out where in my manuscript I lost readers, or got into the worldbuilding weeds, but this was the most thorough and actionable feedback I've ever received on my writing! Seraphina did an analysis of every chapter including what worked well, and where I could tighten it... Tout afficher

I loved working with this beta reader, she was able to see my massive plot and all it's sub-plots and gave me excellent criticism. I highly recommend her, she is professional and very detailed. Since I write epic fantasy, my plot was a huge deal and she immediately understood my genre and gave me feedback accordingly.

This was an excellent review, delving into the details of the manuscript and offering suggestions for improving the writing. I found the analysis insightful, objective, and helpful. Sometimes, I can have the tendency of missing the forest for the trees. I appreciated the reviewer's immediate and unfiltered... Tout afficher

I'm already looking forward to my next round of feedback. She really understood every twist. Every plot point. She picked up where it wasn't fleshed out or too long. But I think most importantly, as someone trying to finish a novel (as I have a history of starting them) it convinced me that I'm making... Tout afficher