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Je lirai en version bêta votre livre de fantasy, romance, historique, sombre, thriller ou érotique
Bonjour ! Je m'appelle Vivian Ayumi et je suis actuellement professeur d'anglais ainsi qu'une lectrice passionnée, aimant plonger dans les histoires. Je suis là pour vous donner un retour honnête et c...
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Répond à des critères de performance élevés et a fait ses preuves en matière de satisfaction clients.
Ce que les gens ont aimé chez ce freelance
environmolds
États-Unis
Vivian provided an extremely thoughtful and detailed beta reader analysis for my literary novella, *The Marsh Bell*. What impressed me most was not only the...
rhuizaro
Mexique
Time and time again, Vivian has proven her work is the best. She is helping me find the small details I might otherwise overlook, enabling me to iron out any...
adamagito
Pays-Bas
Vivian delivered exactly what I was hoping for from a beta read. She actually read the entire manuscript carefully and it shows — her report references specific...
baileybai
Canada
Vivian was incredibly thorough, thoughtful, and detail-oriented throughout the entire beta reading process. Her feedback was clear, constructive, and gave me...
joshuareynolds2
États-Unis
Wow! Just wow. So I put in a request just under a week ago. She had to read some 30,000 words and got it done under the delivery time. Now let's move onto the...
À propos de ce service
S.V.P., envoyez-moi un message avant de passer votre commande ! Je vous enverrai un PDF avec la structure de mon rapport !
Je suis un lecteur passionné et un bêta-lecteur expérimenté spécialisé dans les histoires d’amour, sombre, fantasy, thriller, historique, surnaturel, isekai, LitRPG et érotique. Je sais ce que ressentent les lecteurs, ce qui les fait tourner les pages et ce qui les pousse à poser un livre.
Mon objectif est de fournir un rapport honnête sur l’expérience de lecture, de repérer les incohérences et de vous donner des suggestions pour les corriger.
Je propose des retours détaillés, sincères et émotionnellement fondés pour vous aider à améliorer :
- l’intrigue et la structure
- le rythme
- la lisibilité
- le développement des personnages
- la profondeur émotionnelle
- les trous dans l’intrigue et incohérences (+ suggestions)
- l’ensemble du feedback
Ce que vous recevrez :
- Un rapport de feedback clair et organisé (PDF)
- Un résumé de ce qui fonctionne et ce qui doit être amélioré
Mon feedback est honnête, respectueux et constructif. Je suis là pour vous aider à façonner votre manuscrit pour qu’il devienne sa meilleure version, qu’il s’agisse d’un romance épicé ou d’une fantasy émotionnelle profonde.
Faisons briller votre histoire !
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Anglais
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Sous quel format dois-je envoyer mon manuscrit ?
De préférence Word ou PDF, mais j'accepte également d'autres formats.
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E essiet08
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Vivian was kindly honest, encouraging and most importantly, truly skilled at the art of writing a novel. There were scene issues that I wasn't sure about but needed some prodding and Vivian completely hit my issues on the spot! I'm so glad I found Vivian, she knows writing! But she's also on time, respectful...
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Vivian was amazing to work with! This was my first time sharing my work with someone outside my circle, and I was so nervous, but it was absolutely worth it! The level of feedback and detail I got was incredible, as well as the critiques on what could make the story function better. I highly recommend Vivian if you are looking for a beta-reader!
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États-Unis
Vivian is amazing! I messaged to see if she had availability for a quick turn around for a contest submission for the intro of a book and was so happy when she did! In under 24 hours she received, read and gave a concise, conscientious, and detailed report! LOVE her and will be coming back when the book...
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Vivian was great! She responded quickly to my inquiry and was very professional in her response. She even updated me before she sent the full report. Her insights were meaningful and honest. I felt like her direction was solely for the betterment of the story. Exactly what I wished for! I highly recommend her services!!!
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shady_crafts
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Bulgarie
This is my third time working with Vivian, which by itself should speak volumes! She's a wonderful beta reader who engages deeply with my draft. She also keeps me honest and points out the parts that don't quite land and need more attention, which is deeply appreciated! Thank you, and I look forward to working with you again!
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E essiet08
États-Unis
Vivian was kindly honest, encouraging and most importantly, truly skilled at the art of writing a novel. There were scene issues that I wasn't sure about but needed some prodding and Vivian completely hit my issues on the spot! I'm so glad I found Vivian, she knows writing! But she's also on time, respectful...
4 jours
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Utile?T therealnishil
États-Unis
Vivian was amazing to work with! This was my first time sharing my work with someone outside my circle, and I was so nervous, but it was absolutely worth it! The level of feedback and detail I got was incredible, as well as the critiques on what could make the story function better. I highly recommend Vivian if you are looking for a beta-reader!
8 jours
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Utile?D daciwrites25
États-Unis
Vivian is amazing! I messaged to see if she had availability for a quick turn around for a contest submission for the intro of a book and was so happy when she did! In under 24 hours she received, read and gave a concise, conscientious, and detailed report! LOVE her and will be coming back when the book...
1 jour
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Utile?B bcmeyer_13
États-Unis
Vivian was great! She responded quickly to my inquiry and was very professional in her response. She even updated me before she sent the full report. Her insights were meaningful and honest. I felt like her direction was solely for the betterment of the story. Exactly what I wished for! I highly recommend her services!!!
5 jours
Durée
Utile?S shady_crafts
Client récurrent
Bulgarie
This is my third time working with Vivian, which by itself should speak volumes! She's a wonderful beta reader who engages deeply with my draft. She also keeps me honest and points out the parts that don't quite land and need more attention, which is deeply appreciated! Thank you, and I look forward to working with you again!
4 jours
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