Vyvyan Evans

Vyvyan beta read my novel and provided detailed, actionable constructive feedback to improve the pacing and comedy. Vyvyan analyzed all of the elements of the story (plot, characters etc) and identified keys areas for improvement. I highly recommend him if you are looking for a beta reader who can... Tout afficher

As a first time author, I came to Fiverr with high expectations. I wanted a professional to read every word and bring the perspective of a reader, editor, and agent. Dr. Evans exceeded my highest expectations. He provided 33 pages of insightful analysis full of actionable recommendations and encouragement.... Tout afficher

The developmental editor, Vyvyan Evans, provided helpful suggestions with examples of how to re-write scenes as well as writing style to improve pacing and reader engagement. He gave me insight about the opening and how I could restructure without changing the content of the novel to help get the reader... Tout afficher

Vyvyan exceeded my expectations in every possible way. It was clear from his report that he had not simply read my manuscript, but he genuinely understood the book, my writer voice, and what I was trying to achieve. His feedback was exceptionally detailed, perceptive and constructive, and the value... Tout afficher

Second time working with Vyv and wanted to be much more organized on my second book. Same up with a good plan to build better from the beginning and Vyv did a fantastic job on organizing the novel and helped build a great work bible. Very impressed.